I don’t believe this was a dream. Based on the amount of detail in the story the young man has done this s**t many times before lol.

The content might not be ideal for some ppl considering he’s 15, but it’s good to see young people express themselves through writing. Do your thing RJ!

That little boy has skills, as soon as he is published i will be the first to buy a subscription. lol

The story was hot until you ruined it with mentioning his age.

15 year olds should be writing about and doing other things.

Yea, I’m a prude. So be it.

15 huh? Kudos young man. Let’s be honest, there are 15yr olds out there that are actually having kids, killing people and doing a whole helluva lot worse things than simply writing erotica. Granted, you don’t get this descriptive without having done some things, but at least he’s doing something constructive. So way to go Henry!! Best of luck to you and your obviously God given writing career Bay Boh!! I can’t wait to hear about you in the future!!

@NWSO- This is a good look for you! Way to encourage this young man and pay attention to his gift and talent. Make sure you get a shout out in his first book LOL!

This dude has skills, It had me glued at every point. Good work

I knew something was off about this one. Erotic stories about 15 year old boys and girls…no.

Too nice- u tell this youngin has some skills damn!!!

But yeah mentioning that he was 15 was a downer for me.

I cosign. The story was hot until you mentioned the writer’s age. This here is grown folks business.

What a downer.

I would have to agree with everyone else you should not have mentioned the age. It almost makes me feel like I have done something bad reading this story from a child. Wet Wednesday needs to be 18 and over!!!!!

Good job young man for doing something productive with your time but leave somethings to the grown folks!!!

Hello,
My friend kept telling me to check out your website and ‘wet Wednesday’ and I did. I believe the 15 year old should get a little bit more experience, say in about 6 years, and then he’ll know you don’t describe a woman’s vagina as chewy and if she asks you what her pussy tastes like you don’t say ‘like pussy’ but say ‘nectar from the Gods.’ Another piece of advice…never poke at a woman’s VJJ with your tongue. Not cool! Kiwi…mmmmm…what about mango. Just saying. As you become older you will find out that a woman controls her vagina. Here’s a quote from “The Vagina Monologues” by Eve Ensler. My favorite Vagina Fact: The clitoris is pure in purpose. It is the only organ in the body designed purely for pleasure. The clitoris is simply a bundle of nerves: 8,000 nerve fibers, to be precise. That’s a higher concentration of nerve fibers than is found anywhere else in the body, including the fingertips, lips, and tongue, and it is twice…twice…twice the number in the penis. Who needs a handgun when you’ve got a semiautomatic.

So, young man, keep writing and keep your baby-maker in your dreams so you want have to worry about babies.

Great story. Keep writing!!

and. . yeah, the age of the writer threw me off.

wow henry, way to go man. it no way that you couldnet have done none of this stuff that was in this story…. but i mean who’s to judge ”not me”. you are the author. but yea you had me hooked from the beging to the end, and dont let any of these people bring you down because this story was alsome. ”comming froma true friend”.

I follow this blog daily and have never commented…but I’m appalled at the reactions to this young man’s work…I think most of us have done our experimenting at 15/16 – maybe younger for some…and not too many of us could describe these exoeriences even today in the way this young man did. He’s very talented and that’s the bottom line! Stop acting like 15 year olds don’t have sex…

Keeping doing the do young man!!

Which 15 year old boy does not think about sex all the time?
This kid is writing what is on his mind and doing it quite well too.

At what age do some adults forget when they were kids?

I say to the critics get over yourself, a 15 y-o writes a story that titillates you and you are mad because he is so young. Really!!

I agree, his age threw me off and kick my arousal level down a few notches. The story was great. Im with Cheryl that the way he described a few things was off and was a tell that the author may have been young. I think being 15 and writing erotica is not bad when you consider all of the other things he could be doing. Hell, I was 15 and writing bomb as erotica. Being a good writer is a gift, one which he has. I say keep doin your thing….

First off kudos to Henry for the story! At 15 years old, this young man has a talent in verbal articulation that many men AND women 3 or 4 times his age have never mastered.

While I agree that the story content was a little ‘too grown’ for the writer, I must say that we must continue to support him in his desire to be a writer. Honestly, I would rather read about this than read about some killing spree or gang related violence that most teens write about. No matter HOW much we try to deny it, sex is ever present in all age genres…teens, kids, adults, senior citizens….we all can relate through sex. Stop downing the baby because his teen vernacular is not what you would say!

Keep up the good work Henry!

1) CherylS, “never poke a woman’s…with your tounge.” say what? I love when my honey does that!

2) I didn’t read the entire story, just the first few PP and the last one. (I got somewhere I gotta be!)

But either the age-detractors forgot what they had done or were trying to do at 15, or weren’t doing anything!

At least the young man isn’t just writing “bend dat azz ovah and …” lol

Lastly, because of my own teen times, I hope I don’t have to break my soon to be 14 y/o daughter’s damn neck! “trembling in terror”

@Cheryl Sheppard – “Nectar of the Gods”?

If the young dude wrote that it would have been totally off and I think it sounded wack. If you would taste yourself you’d find that pussy tastes like pussy.

I was up really late and read this when there were no comments and wanted to see people’s reactions. While he is a talented writer, reading erotica about younger teenage sex (vs 18, 19– legal adult age) was kinda creepy to me.

Reading the reactions, though, I’m kinda surprised. Wonder if people would be as supportive if he were a girl.

Devils’ advocate,

What if I was Henry at 15 and people told me that I couldn’t or shouldn’t write erotica (or anything) and I actually listened?

Then there never would have been a NWSO or a Wet Wednesdays.

Just something to think about…

Its Wednesday already?

I remember hopping out of windows and hiding in closet. Dont really miss it though.

What if I was Henry at 15 and people told me that I couldn’t or shouldn’t write erotica (or anything) and I actually listened?

For me personally, it’s not that he is writing, it’s the public-ness of it all. It seems like sexual objectification of teenage children. I’m kinda bothered by it, maybe it’s because I’m a parent.

detail is amazing, for a 15 year old, i haven’t experienced anything like this in real life or a fantasy

a now, at 32, I am still learning, I just stopped, just laying there, honestly, and yet i don’t know what makes it so good for the guys i’ve been with

i do not have a memory of my first great sexual experience, i remember having a boyfriend, and it not fitting, and me moving on to the next boyfriend, and him being small enough to achieve a fit

and yet i still have not achieved an orgasm with a partner

but i digress

I wrote some stuff when I was young. I shared it with other young ones. I guess that’s the issue for some of us. It’s like a child porn thing or something. Like men messing with 16 y-o’s. Maybe lil dude needs to make a blog for teens: “naked wit socks on in the basement”.

Good post, I think most people who have taken issue with the age of the writer faill to remember what is was like at 15 and even still may be a bit conservative on their views about teenagers and sex/erotica. I think at 15 to be able to write like this only says that Henry has quite the potential to write other genre’s even better!

My hat’s off to the young man, may he continue writing in all aspects and all genre’s which interest him as it makes him that much a better writier overall.

Personally, I don’t see what the big deal is. When I was 30 (about 10 years ago), my cousin who is 10 years younger than me lived with me for a minute.

Every night I’d come home and there would be condoms all around the house – except in my room and the kitchen. I asked him to clean up after himself – which he did. However, I was wrong to *assume* he was having sex all over the house.

His friends (about 4 guys) would have one or two girls over to “service” them. I walked in on it and everyone was just comfortable being naked and having sex in front of each other.

Bottom line, today’s kids are on the next level of sex. And today we listen to kids RAP about having sex at a young age, so what’s the difference?

Wheeewwww!!!!

Do you remember your first teenage love affair?

Oh yes, he was a sweet boy and very romantic for his age!…sniff sniff I kinda miss that part.

What was special about that experience for you?
Just alot of firsts, and how something so new felt so good! Only a prelude of things to come

Did you enjoy the thrill of sneaking around your parent’s house just to have sex or couldn’t wait to have a place of your own to get your freak on?
I wanted a place of my own, am not a quiet person and I enjoy my privacy!

Was sex more exciting when you were first learning your body or do you think experience has enhanced your bedroom skills more?
It was more akward then, but nevertheless still learnt.

Were you embarrassed about your first wet dream?
No excited, and sad cause I had to wake up!

What did you think of this Wet Wednesdays entry?
Loved it!

Are you surprised something like this could come from a 15-year-old?
Nope if anything it inspires me to be a better writer.

15 and already writing like that? 15 and already doing it like that? Already having a “finale?” Watch out, girls. Hell, watch out, world.

B.

Hey Mr. or Ms. I.B. Blunt…have you ever tasted PUSSY…It’s so sweet and taste like nothing you’ve ever had. Go ahead, no one’s looking, stick a finger in your VJJ or hers and lick very slowly and taste the goodness. Maybe its just mine. (smile) Come on ladies (guys too) you know what I’m saying. Anywho, everyone’s VJJ’s taste is different, but saying ‘pussy tastes like pussy’ is a very broad statement.
So next time you perform cunnilinigus take some time to savor this fabulous part of a woman’s body!

I was having sex at 15 so writing about it would probably have been a better outlet, LOL

Also, sex was better when I was teen. That was when I actually had orgasms. Now, never.

If his parents are okay with his writing and gave their permission…

I remember reqading erotica at 15 so its not too far off to be writing it at the same age.

I, for one, enjoyed the post. Although it was young in it’s language, it was a good read. I’m not put off by the young man’s age at all. I recall in highschool being comissioned to write such stories and poetry myself. It was an outlet for my mind and my hormones!

I don’t remember my first wet dream but I do remember my first sexual experience. It was exciting then b/c we were inexperienced and we thought we were doing something by cutting school and going home and just exploring. That excitement could never be duplicated. Now its a matter of anticipation b/c we are more experienced and we find different ways to “push the boundary”.

Keep up the good work Henry, it’ll only get better with time.

@NWSO Thanks for encouraging a fellow writer to do what his heart calls for him to do, and providing an outlet to be heard!!

Good job to you both~

Wow 15… good that he is writing and not hanging in the streets. as long as he keeping it under control with just writing and not focusing on GIRLS. i really think he would be a great writer i just hope he turns towards something more positive and encouraging for readers in his age group…keep up the good work…Why are you even on this website?

Yo dis my boy henry and he’s a very talented writer well he should b because we wanna write books or “erotic ” novels in his case. He’s been very dedicated and put alot of time into this plus he gets none LMAO! Nah but he’s got a good head on his shoulder and with more work and more sexaul expericence maybe he might change his statement p**** is p****

Nice post.
Lets be real ladies and gentlemen. Seriously. So many of our kids are doing this stuff already. Now, I’m not really that fond of the idea myself (baby brothers having sex…EWWWW), but the sideways shade/half compliments/downright judgement that some of y’all are passing out is not necessary. Shoot, I don’t know the kid, he may or may not be doing the do. Perhaps he watches a lot of porn. LOL. Whatever keeps him interested in writing & NOT out on a corna ret’ to go upside someone’s head for their sneakers works for me…

@ Cheryl Sheppard

I don’t know about anyone else but I have not tasted anything else that taste like pussy!!
If you know of something else please let us all know.

So the writer stating that is probably a play on “taste like chicken”, just a literary device at play.

Im having trouble with the 15 too. They may think all kinds of stuff but I dont know that we should be printing it

The story was hot…point blank period. Although I wasn’t having sex at 15 ( i waited till college), I identify with where he’s coming from because at that age everyone wants to have sex. The age factor did turn me off though, truth be told.

I Think He Is A Good Writer. Its Always The Age Thing That Seems To Discredit Talent. 15 Or Not The Man Has Talent With Writing. He Knows How To Express Himself And Articulate A Vision With Words. Stop Hating On The Young Man And Give Props.

This boy has sklils. Hmmm somebody’s been freaking at home lol I remember sex in my teens. I would say I have sex better instead of back then, I have more experience with women. I didn’t sneak in my parents home. I did it in odd places

this is amazing. out of all the stuff henry has written (that i’ve read), i think this is one his greatest pieces. he definitely has talent….

Decent Erotica Henry Well Done! I do wonder what the reaction would be if it was a 15 year old GIRL who was the author? hmmm

besides the GREAT writing skills!!
i don’t know how i feel about it being from a 15 yr old, separately from the written word. I try to teach sex awareness to teens. ummm this needs to come with a whole world of conversation…
but it is good!!!

right there brother ! dass my big brooo yah –

I’m no prude, but I’m almost twice his age and I have yet to have a dream, or even real-life encounter that steamy. For my little sister’s sake, I hope that he’s exceptional, and this isn’t how all teenage boys think.

It was all good…..

until you mentioned his age.

Sorry, the age thing kinda fucked with my head (NO pun intended).

*feels gross and walks away*

What I think is interesting is that there are so many baby pop stars out there singing or rapping their hearts out about “grown folk business” but yet everyone continues bopping right along to the beat and never bat an eye…maybe because its to music? Or maybe because it’s easier to hear a 15 year old express their sexual desire less eloquently or by talking about wanting to be up in her and for her to have his kids…. :-/

The fact that Henry is able to express his sexual thoughts and desires so well, beautifully yet with just the right touch of explicitness, says that not only is he a talented writer, but he is probably also very much in touch with himself and his sexuality. I think that is an awesome thing to be, whether he is 15 or 39.

Good job Henry, I hope you continue pursuing your writing, because if you have skills like that at this age, your potential will lead you very far! And if you can freak out so many “grown folk” because they got all hot and bothered by your erotica, can you imagine what you’ll be able to accomplish with a few more years of life and writing experience?? wow

young guys got skills! what people would consider a kid..might be doing grown up things! It is what it iss! my generation is something elsee hahaha we know about the grown uppp! Keep up the good work Henry..and I mean that both wayss! lol

I happen to know Henry verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyy well, so I give him kudos for taking the next step in his writing. Keep it up lil Broyther!

GULP. Damn why do I feel dirty? Butterah…that’s why I mess with young boys-not as young as Henry; they have to be over 18. But these churlen ain’t playing. They will lick you from the rooter to the tooter and know what they doing.

Hen, call me when you turn 18 bruh.

Loved the post and not sure why some people commenting acting like they didn’t think or talk about sex at 15.

I for one think he writing is absolutely amazing – wish I had that much talent when I was his age.

I think we freak out because adults thinking sexually about under the age people is an instinctive and legal no-no. If I was closer to Henry’s age I would have felt better because in my mind now after reading it, my being aroused with the piece became synonymous with wanting a 15 yr old to do me … so in my mind it’s wrong.

It’s already hard enough visually with all the adult and sexy looking teens out there …. I used to teach boys only classes too …. But at least there it hopefully stays to illicitly admiring bodies… With the piece it became linked to actual sex and that was the creepy part. Worse thing is, I usually mess with guys in their 20s even though I’m 30+, so bringing it another decade down was too close.

However it was an excellent piece and really captured the moment. All the comments, creepy, judging whatever are props to Henry’s talent. He sucked us in, made it feel real … and now we feel like “oh shit! jailbait!”

All my best wishes for the future of this really good writer, but seeing that i waited til college to have sex… I also want to tell him to keep his tongue in his mouth and his **** in his pants . Yep, lol, I’m also a hypocrite, cause I watched and read porn as a teen.

wowwww.

“my being aroused with the piece became synonymous with wanting a 15 yr old to do me…”

And THAT is what grossed me out. At my age, that’s wrong in MY mind (to each one’s own) and illegal (re: statutory rape laws). If we (me and the author) were in the same age range, my thoughts about it might be different. But since that’s not the case…..

sooooo , were you writingg this while i was on the phone with you . I hope not lol .

Yeah, hopefully this is just a fantasy b/c i didn’t see one mention of any kind of protection. Clearly from the exchanges between the two, there hadn’t previously been much discussion about sex before this tryst. To any other actual 15 year olds reading this, Don’t put your mouth on anything that hasn’t been tested and/or anything thats “all over the place”. All them “juices” he swallowed could have had some herpes and ghonnoreah mixed in with em’….yummy…??@!!!??/

Creative expression has no age. I started writing erotica when I was 14 and honestly believe I am better for it. Did I do anything at that age? Nope. 6 years later and still not doing anything. Imagination people. Embrace it. As for RJ ^_^ you go boy! Sucks that you didn’t get to finish. Your dream that is lol

i remember my 1st teenage love and all i can say is “Look where He brought me from”.

Don’t get me wrong i would not trade the experience it has taught me things that I find very useful today

um , baby . nsfw .

a dream, wow! great dream!

Hello,
I am new to this blog. I recently started reading it and have never commented before.

I want to say to Henry “keep on keeping on”. I think he is a very talented young man.

Yes, his age may have thrown many readers off but that is b/c they felt they were taking part in something “taboo” b/c of the erotic content written by a 15 year old. And yes legally he is still a child. But there are lots of teens that are doing grown things. Even tweens!!

I am sure that many, if not all, posters/readers can think back to their teenage years and remember some sort of adult activity going on. Maybe, Maybe not.

Oh, NWSO I love this blog!!

Again HENRY DO YOUR THING. DON’T BE DISCOURAGED BY THE NAYSAYERS