Yes, I’ll Be Your Bitch (Behind Closed Doors)

June 24th 2009 in *Wet Wednesdays/Erotica, Guest Socks, Poetry/Prose, Relationships/Love

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It’s the middle of the week so you know how we do on NakedWithSocksOn.com. We turn up the heat with a little bit of erotic writing. Well, this week is a special edition of Wet Wednesdays as we have a guest blogger named Anisha all the way from India. Yes, you read correctly, India. Well, technically Muscat, Oman for the summer, but like me you probably never heard of it ’til now. If having a reader from that corner of the globe wasn’t surprising enough, wait until you read her submission.

A few weeks ago, y’all might remember I wrote “You Wouldn’t Wanna Be My Bitch? (Pillow Talk).” It was a titillating piece of writing that ruffled some feathers and moistened some others. Well, Anisha was so moved by the piece that she wrote an answer blog, “Yes, I’ll Be Your Bitch.” Sounds like an erotica showdown. Check out her post below and speak your piece…

“Yes, I’ll Be Your Bitch”

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If you promise to tease and taunt me long
Before we get behind closed doors.

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If you’ll pull me hard and strong against your body.
Your grip turning hard from soft as you look into my eyes,
Silently promising the ride of my life.

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If tonight I can and will be your animal,
And all of it is etched on your walls and in your mind forever.

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If you’ll let me rip your clothes while I straddle you.
Tearing everything that stands in the way—your clothes, your inhibitions, your past.

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If you treat me not like a fragile female, but an equal in every sense.
Be not gentle—I’ll beg if that’s how you like it.

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If you let me push you against a wall, look up into your eyes,
Tell you to hold on for dear life, and I see no judgment in your eyes.

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If you pull me up in the middle of frenzied fellatio.
Push me against the same wall, and growl against my mouth, “It’s my turn!”

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If you let my hands guide your head, yank your hair, steer you, and grind against your mouth,
’Til I explode, shaking, pulsating and spent against you.

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If you don’t settle for one orgasm, pick my exhausted body,
And resurrect me with your words, lips, hands and manhood.

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If you ignore my feeble protests to tie my hands above me,
And have your way.

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes really.
If you tease me until I beg you to enter me, and wrap my legs around you,
Matching your movement with mine.

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If you promise to make me scream, promise to whisper, “louder, louder…”
Uncaring, untie me, turn me around, grab my hips, watch me, look at me like you have at no one else,
Order me to turn around and watch you make me your plaything.

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If you promise to let your guard down and let me take control.
Let me be on top, and watch you tremble and groan.

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If I can ride you, closing my eyes, body arched, speaking in tongues, nails digging into your chest,
While you plunge into me and hold my waist, punishing me with each thrust.

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If you push yourself off the bed so you can look at my changing expressions,
My legs wrapped strong around your waist and watch me melt, slowly dying into your body.

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If your nibble turns to a bite, and your bitch turns to a whore.
If you take it up a notch, surprising me every second, reiterating, “I’ve never known a time like this, and none that follow will match this.”

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If once I let out my primal scream, I can watch your body tense until you melt and fill me with you.
I want you to let me see you at your weakest. Bare yourself to me.
Uncaring of time, indulgence is all that exists.

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If you lick my bruises, and let me soothe your wounds,
Murmuring loving, doting nonsense that only you and I can understand.

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If you let me take my time to look into your eyes to try and fathom what we’ve shared.
Let me watch you look at me, and see you frown at my questioning gaze.
Kiss me reassuringly; this was not just one night.

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41 comments to...
“Yes, I’ll Be Your Bitch (Behind Closed Doors)”
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Shay from L.A. (Los Angeles)

The poem was hot…But who is that chick in the bottom picture? Can I have her? I want her…pretty please.


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DJ Stiletto

Wow. Anisha, you did an amazing response for all the female readers.

Ans, she’s giving you a run for your money on this one :)

As always, a great WW!


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karate kid

that was simply amazing. I pride myself in being a woman that goes after what I want in a relationship bedroom & in the bedroom . this is gonna be a long night full of sweet agony, waiting for my man to come home tonight. im just gonna wait on for him with nothing on but a pair of ‘cheekies’ & a devilish grin.
anisha, you definately should guest blog more often. love you too nwso.


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eleeaune

Great poem!

“”If I can ride you, closing my eyes, body arched, speaking in tongues, nails digging into your chest,
While you plunge into me and hold my waist, punishing me with each thrust.”"

Is it bad that all i could think of was crazy chic from “Don’t Be a Menace”? LOL!


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Aldiddy

I am now sold on being called a bitch or calling someone a bitch. I have seen the light. I am now a witness. LOL. Tell the girl at the end of the page that she can call me Aldiddy. Mr Bitch if she is nasty. LOL


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Lopa

awesome job Anishuuu…. i love it… well written without any inhibitions… gr8 work!!!


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Peajez

I can honestly say I look forward to WW every week! I actually wait up for the post!!! Good job guest blogger and thank u Ans for giving her the stage!


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July

I’ve decided I hate Wet Wednesdays, I read, get all excited and ish then go home to what…my pillow. This torture needs to end! :-) Great work Anishu that piece will most def have me gripping my pillow tight tonight lol!


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Raycent

WOW!!..THANK YOU, Anisha from India, summering in Oman (enjoy as I went to Univ with a couple guys from Oman and I saw some beautiful pix of their homeland). Anisha, you have spoken for some of us ladies & captured the feelings just so…and I say THANK YOU AGAIN as a woman & fellow poet!! Anslem-Thank you for providing Anisha with this platform/opportunity to share her work with us! Would love to see more! Appreciate your mixing it up for us on Wet Wednesdays! Still following!:)..

“If you let me take my time to look into your eyes to try and fathom what we’ve shared. Let me watch you look at me, and see you frown at my questioning gaze. Kiss me reassuringly; this was not just one night.”

“I want you to let me see you at your weakest. Bare yourself to me. Uncaring of time, indulgence is all that exists.”

“If you promise to let your guard down and let me take control. Let me be on top, and watch you tremble and groan.”


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Dc Man with a Plan

good work, Anisha….Many of us have trouble thinkin of persons from India as being sexually on the leading edge bcuz most persons from India we see seem so reserved, so conservative…neva woulda thought there are FREAKS in India! Then again, it’s the second most populous place on the planet…so somebody’s definitely F*cking ova there and where there’s f*cking, there’s bound to be a freak or two……….lol..And I’m with Shay…the chick in the second pic, she can get my whole pay check every two weeks starting right now! I’ll def make the: kids, yo, daddy done got sprung…y’all on your own from this point forward CALL….right now if she just tells me I got a shot at sleepin with THAT look every night……


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pkasso

nice


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Sharon David

wow! Anisha!! I had no idea you write! and stuff like this! wow! I loved it!!! Id love to read more of your work..
This poem made me melt! Could feel it through every pore of my body..! love it love it love it!!


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Chyna

*snap, snap, snap* Great work girl! You captured what I think all of us ladies have thought at one time or another…think I need to start writing again as well…poetry and short stories are my fav


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MizzRenea

Awesome job girl. Definately a great poem……. Love Wet Wednesdays!!!


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litabia

That was a great poem baby girl.


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nishath nizar

the first time i read abt will u be my bitch, which was incidentally passed on to me by anisha herself – i was like – woah! that is erotic. and then she says that she has written a response to that. and i read it first a week back and i was like – woah woah!!! that is more than just a fitting reply, that is awesome!!!

and to find it here on nwso! it says it all – she does kick ass!!! and we need more of her guest blogging!!!


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Mike Brown the REMIX

Wow… all this time I’ve been saying bitch and I never realized there were terms and conditions associated with it. IGeez, do I stand corrected… These women are sure are some smart little critters.

(Don’t judge me)


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Faye

Incredible writing Anisha. Thanks for the response. This piece brings insight into how some of us women feel.


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acotten

Thanks, hot, hot, hot… Next week I will have to make sure I am not reading this a work.. .


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Nineesha Lewis

Think I can safely say this is one of your best works ever. You have some gift !! Its like a million womens voices in one poem and you are like the medium!!! awesome babe!!! Keep up the great work!!! AMAZING!!! Love ya.


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Nineesha

Oh and great response to YOU WOULD’NT WANNA BE MY BITCH!!
Bravo!!


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anisha

wow…. blush blush blush… if i could respond to every comment… i would’nt know where to start … i love that i’ve broken a stereotype, i love that there is so much support and non judgemental appreciation. none of this would have happened without the platform nwso provided and the immense inspiration with every piece of work on this blog. i can hardly express the gratitude i am overwhelmed with. but thank you all… so much.


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ebwriter

Very hot poem!


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samantha

This reply was pure genius! Great work, and NWSO excellent blog, daily reader since I stumbled upon the blog in 07.

Xoxo

Sam


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grownandsexy

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If once I let out my primal scream, I can watch your body tense until you melt and fill me with you.
I want you to let me see you at your weakest. Bare yourself to me.
Uncaring of time, indulgence is all that exists

that is the sexiest s**t in the world! get it girl!!!!


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da ThRONe

@July

Im glad somebody is finally on my side with “Work you up for nothing Wednesday’s” LOL

*And for the record I did not read the blog*

I refuse to do it to myself every Wednesday. To Whom it may concerns I cleaned the house today! LMAO!

Peace!


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Deezay 247

OMG!! Someone give me a fan!! That was hotter and steamier than Atlanta on a summer day!

Is there a guy out there really like that?!?! If only there were…..

Anisha, you definitely have a talent!!

~Change the world, don’t just live in it!


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Anonymous

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS (:


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Mimi in the OC

Great job


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Neska

gyirl!!! Oy, im ova here fannin maself cuz u done made it 100 degrees in this room!

Ooph, “If your nibble turns to a bite, and your bitch turns to a whore.” there’s a possibilty!


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Anonymous

@ Neska that was definetly the line….


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NWSO

@Samantha

Since 07? NWSO only been around a year, unless you were following from when I was just posting for fun on MySpace

either way, thanx for the loyalty


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Sharon David

I love this as a whole! But the last three stanzas were my fav!

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If once I let out my primal scream, I can watch your body tense until you melt and fill me with you.
I want you to let me see you at your weakest. Bare yourself to me.
Uncaring of time, indulgence is all that exists.

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If you lick my bruises, and let me soothe your wounds,
Murmuring loving, doting nonsense that only you and I can understand.

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If you let me take my time to look into your eyes to try and fathom what we’ve shared.
Let me watch you look at me, and see you frown at my questioning gaze.
Kiss me reassuringly; this was not just one night.


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Cali

Girl! Girl! Girl! You straight put it down for the ladies. I give you mad props on that poem, and don’t stop cause I would like to hear more from Ms. Anisha from India. That was really HOT! I don’t know what the hell us readers are gonna do with two of you. Between NWSO and Anisha it seems like our Wet Wednesday’s are gonna get even wetter. And I don’t know if I could handle all of that, but I’ll make it work someway or another. You two will be having people leaving work or wherever the hell they at, trying to go home and react scenes.

P.S. NWSO you need to go ahead and hire Anisha, cause that girl has mad talent!…


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Jazzy

Nice work!
If this male/female response became a fixed feature of Wet Wednesday, I wouldn’t be mad at all.


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mjc

loving it :-)


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preetha

Needless to say I love the uninhibited you. This is by far my favourite of your work. Keep it coming!


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BADbrownbunny

Girl thanks for putting into words the thoughts that run through my mind. I will be the Queen “B” just for him


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anisha

thank you P.. :) …i realised letting it all go, has great rewards.. : )… love you !…

BADbrownbunny- loving the name btw : )… this was intended to show how we can let go , be uninhibited .. be animal… : )…


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the girl that be me

loved it.

loved it.

lovvvvved it.

you’ve captured it all…and this one right here??

I’ll let you call me your bitch.
Yes, really.
If you let me take my time to look into your eyes to try and fathom what we’ve shared.
Let me watch you look at me, and see you frown at my questioning gaze.
Kiss me reassuringly; this was not just one night.

wow.


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BMW2K

I think I will have this framed and hung in my master bedroom. LOL – but yeah . . . seriously I think I will.






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