Sadomasochistic Soliloquy (I Fu#ked Her With My Pen)

May 13th 2009 in *Wet Wednesdays/Erotica, Poetry/Prose, Relationships/Love, Writing/Fiction

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She said she wanted to try something different, so I fucked her with my pen. I grabbed a ballpoint and started scribbling on her inner thigh. I believe the ink was blue, but in this dim light I couldn’t tell—and truthfully, it really didn’t matter. I treated her flesh like a blank canvas and etched out hieroglyphics. This wasn’t graffiti I was creating, it was something I wanted to last her a lifetime.

As my words got longer and more complex, I filled every inch of her succulent left thigh until there was nowhere left to write, so I continued on her right side, gently tracing her hip bone. I felt like a tattoo artist blessed with the skill of Picasso and the steady hand of Michael Angelo. My words were a pleasurable art, and every syllable I wrote made her spine tingle. Each verb made her vibrate. A mere noun could make her tremble. My sentences overpowered her senses, and my paragraphs made her knees buckle and collapse.

Finally, her hips and thighs were covered with my words. Powerful, Beautiful, Queen, Love, Chocolate, Sensual, Tight, Good, Bangin’, Sweet, Nectar, Lust and even my own name accented with an apostrophe S layered her skin. Alas, there was nowhere left to write except for this manicured lawn above. Apparently someone had left the sprinklers on, because this fertile ground was soaking wet. This troubled me none, and I continued with my work.

First, I wrote around the lawn, careful not to disrupt the bushes. And as words like Now, Ready, Enter, Thrust, Stroke and Deeper circled her nether region, I had no choice but to leave my mark within the foliage. I wrote and wrote, working the stroke of my pen with ease. Eventually I reached this small mountain, which I later discovered was an inactive volcano ready to erupt. I climbed to its apex and scrawled my full government name in Japanese calligraphy across the rim. I had only taken a few classes, so of course I had to write my name over and over again until each curve of my stroke was perfect.

My vigorous pen strokes must have stimulated the lava beneath the surface because I began to feel a surge of energy rising up to my fingertips. As this rush of heat came rumbling towards me, I assumed it would singe my fingertips but the fluid was more soothing than I could have imagined and I basked in its beauty like a gentle summer rain. Although drenched to my elbows, I focused on my words and just kept writing. She said she wanted to try something different, so I fucked her with my pen.

Fin!

Can your pen do that? Speak your piece…

**P.S. Props to my man Gardy for the main pic.

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76 comments to...
“Sadomasochistic Soliloquy (I Fu#ked Her With My Pen)”
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Shulkie

Oh, My….

That’s what I get for staying up late. I’m going to bed!

Nice words!


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da ThRONe

Is the pen a tongue? If so your a huge freak dude!

You make me proud! LOL


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GVG

WOW!


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msshedevil

All I can say is DAMN! The words were vivid and painted a glorious picture. Thanks,,,lol


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Sexclibra

That was quite an interesting entry, but to answer your question, nope my pen can’t do that…can I borrow yours? :)


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da ThRONe

For the record Im a pen with no paper to write on. I have some term papers I would like to do! But good clean paper just cost to much. And I want a notebook not just a few loose leaf papers here and there.


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Avah Royal

I loved it!


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Neska

No, but i would sure love a pen that did


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kathie

um, very interesting and intriguing. Got me wondering if you would use my brown array as a canvas and use a paint brush instead of pen, make it more interesting, eh . . .lol


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brooklynzone

The body is a playground…..I love it.


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distinguishedgentlewoman

…..Exhale. You’re simply brilliant.


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Trent

Creativity at its best


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LondonChick

The pen is definitely mightier than the sword!


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VirgoVida

Early Morning Imaginative Erotica !?!?! No pens at work, so I’m gonna need some waffles to curve this craving. Thanks for nothing NWSO. lmao.


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K-Love

That was so sexy..dude you are talented.


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Sunny Dee

Fantastic!!!! I loved that! You are truly brilliant with your words!


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bellabellablue

wow..very interesting..to all the teachers on here..how are you going to grade papers using a “pen” and not think about this…hmmm..but than again…it might make you smile


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blkchk

so vivid, so creative, SO FREAKY!!!! ME LIKEY!!! ;-)


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Mika

WOW!!! I will be taking a early lunch today!!


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MsTrecie

You are amazing with words…this is better than any Zane book by far! Every word had me holding on with anticipation of great things, and I must say I was not disappointed. You do with words what most men only dream of in reality!
Now if I can only seem to focus on my work….

P.S.- You need to teach a class on how to work the pen like that! ;)


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notahater

that was sexxxy…almost made me cum on my seat and i’m at work :)


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Clarissia Walker

That left me speechless!


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Ms.Laik

Wow!!! Took my breath away. I need to find one of those pens…


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sohoissooverated

Amazing!!!!


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Soulyn

ooohh, lovin it. Thanks, my astrological brotha, we are truly some freaks.


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knynethepoetiksoul

I’m speechless! After this is there is nuthin’ else for me to say!


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Shawn Lee

lotta sticky thighs out there…


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JessyRod

brilliant samuri, just brilliant.


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ChuckDonald

dammmnnnn son… Brother you have talent/skills/imagination! I am inspired! I want to write. Where is my canvas? Steadyyy, steadyyyy, relaxxxxx, realxxxx… Self-control, you can do this.. YES 30sec… Fin!!! LMAO


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sexychoc

That was unbelievable! Gotta find me a brotha with a pen, LOL!


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July

Wow…just wow!


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Duchess Eva

OMG!!!!!!! I had to respond to this one! My first response, I’ve been reading NWSO for a a few weeks now. I love it and I’m hooked!!!!!!! Had me on the edge of my seat, hanging on to every word. Between reading this and listening to some reggae, i’m ready for some lunchtime loving!!!!!!!! Keep it up and I’ll be requesting a date from Bermuda!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Lady Love

Damn! All my lady parts are abuzz. If only all dudes understood that it’s more about mental stimulation than anything else. NWSO, if you were experiencing a drought before, you shouldn’t be anymore. I’m tempted to look you up. LOL


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Anonymous

omg! you go boy


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angel

Whatcha doin’ later, Ans?


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ladyaj

NWSO….man you done done it again….wow….just wow….love it….


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Dc Man with a plan

props to my brotha. Like a cool crooner who gets the women MORE ready for their man, you are a good helper–so I ain’t madatcha at all. You got all of the honey’s up in here sounding like they been celibate for a minute…. I must confess (and I can provide names of those who would provide testimonials) that I have been known to work a pen until the ink turns to lead…. but this is your moment. well done.


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Shay

Loved it!


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da ThRONe

@LadyLove

I have written poetry and have gotten negative or no feedback from most of the females. Females dont care as much about “Mental stimulation” as you think!


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lynn

Good Lord!!! now that was something serious my eyes are wide open and while reading that i had to pick up my jaw a few times lol excellent imagery!!


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MsRenise

I have been perusing ur blogs for months now and simply enjoyed reading the insight of other “commenters”. However today you touched more of me than many men. And eventhough I am still speechless, I at least had to say “DAMN!”

Now that we’ve engaged…lol…I should be more comfortable to reply…;)


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litrisha

Very, very, interesting…..that theory is VERY INTERESTING………all I have to say!


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Latsyrc41

Now that’s what I’m talking about! That was incredible. She’s a lucky woman.


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almost famous

well damn…i am at work…and I need someone to come F*&K me with their pen ASAP….. i am about to leave work right now…on a quest to find the perfect writer……


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Latsyrc41

Ok, I know I already posted, but damn…that turned me ALL THE WAY ON!


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katmamblu

lol londonchick, does size matter? I think not……


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older & wiser

Yes, indeed!


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Lady Love

@Da Throne

Not all ladies, hun. If you don’t have my mind, then there is nothing you can really do for me.
I think you’ve been trying to write poetry on Post-Its, when what you really need is a leather bound journal with your initials monogrammed in gold on the cover. ; ) Think about it…


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lady may

Is there any limit to your talent? Whoa. This is up there with your choking story- for real. Just sensual and vivid. Nice. Effn. Work. Ans.

Out.


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Nicki

NWSO, this was truly great. I felt like I should have gone into another room to read this!

@ da throne
You must be reading and showing the poetry to the wrong ladies. Poetry is one of the romantic things a man can do for a woman. It’s great mind candy!


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The_RYL

Wow! The mind is a powerful thang! I honestly FELT what you wrote. You know that feeling that moves from your head to your toes, just beneath the skin . . . feels kinda icy and electric at the same time?! Yeah . . .

I wish I could write like that (literally)! You’ve inspired me to pick up my dusty journal and just let the ideas flow.

And . . . I wish I could “be written” like that (figuratively), too!

Please keep the good stuff coming! hehe


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Jenn Perez

Dammit NWSO.. Didnt I tell you Im going through a Divorce!! I can’t handle all this Homework! LOL!
that was some GOOOD ish!! and You kicked Zane’z ass with all this Good Stuff!!!
If I turn into a freak before Memorial weekend ~~ It’ll be ALL your fault!!
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Till PEN and PAPER meet again Jenn!!!


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Simply Azsa

*fans face to ease the prespiration* lol

but seriously. this was amazing. i love when people can do more than hold a conversation (yes i see blogs as a conversation…a bit delayed but an exchange of thoughts and ideas, nonetheless) anywho… i love when people can actually mindfuck** you with words (in a good way. not abusing the power) this was very stimulating. i like the creative approach that you have been taking lately. i think it definately works for you- and your audience enjoys it.

** ’scuse my french. it seemed like the proper terminology. haha. =)


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Sean

Dats HOTT!!!


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Ru-Sel

Flawless Victory!

Love it! True pen-etration of the mind. This goes beyond blogging.

Did I mention I loved it already?


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Ms P

DAMN.DAMN.DAMN.

I am at a loss for words right now…damn…


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sankore

I must admit when I read the first few lines, I was thinking, dude has lost his Damn MIND!!. But as I kept reading I finally understood. My favorite part is when you wrote:

Powerful, Beautiful, Queen, Love, Chocolate, Sensual, Tight, Good, Bangin’, Sweet, Nectar, Lust.

All I can say is DAMN. Love you are truly gifted. You have just taken mind sex to a whole new level. You have done good Grasshopper (lol)

Peace


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Shulkie

LOL @ NWSO getting’ all the ladies hot and bothered!


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da ThRONe

@Lady Love & Nicki

Ever girl I gave my best work to look at me like a lame after. I am an ex-artist so Im pretty damn nice with words(maybe not Ans nice) but Im on point. And Im sure my shit is in somebody trash. And Im sensitive about my shit! LOL


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the s

sensual, beautiful and lovely…just started reading the site, and will def frequent more often after this post…


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Mia

all i can is say WOW! i knew there was a reason why i read ur blogs! this was truly beautiful & in a word – genius!


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Will

Well done, sir!


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La-La

I loved that, mind stimulating…i love that!! makes me wanna buy a pack of pens damnit!! Beautifulllllllllllllll NWSO!! my mind nutted!! good job baby


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Peajez

I’ve been so busy with my studies that Ive been behind on your blogs but damn!!!!! The visual in my head right now……. Brilliant


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Cali

Ok! Hold the damn phones. That was some good SHIT. Very vivid and detailed, I liked it alot. The whole writing / foreplay was definitely HOT! I would try that part out in a heartbeat. But that second part, I mean how does that work? I don’t know about getting f**cked with a pen, I might just have to leave that for someone else.


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YoungJay

@ NWSO

Duuuuude, your a beast for this one. I need to become a writer cuz I could see a woman being putty in your hands after reading this..lol


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paulettebajangal

Are there any pens with edible ink? Cause a brother would have to go a step further and wipe the writing off with his tongue.


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Seattlesfinest

{slow dramatic clap} Bravo!

Oh my dang!!! You rock! I’m drewlin’ over here. Now that…my friend…is amazing. The visual you left in my head is phenomenal.

Can we get an encore? teehehe

Luv ya lots…keep the blogs coming. :-)


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love2read

alll I can say is OMG!!!!


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Queen Franklin

Nice, real nice


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SingleMama

wow…speechless…


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ebwriter

Very impressive!


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Natasha

Again, I love your writing skills. Very powerful writing! I LOVED this! Keep doing what you do. Do you have any books?


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NWSO

@Natasha

Thanx

Sorry, no books YET! Stay tuned :)


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Lyriic

Just recently became aware of your site. And I am now HOOKED! Love this one.


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Ty

All I can say is wow!






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